http://railways.national-preservation.com/showthread.php/22949-A-level-media-short-film?p=335394
James has also put our film on a forum, http://playstuff.net/showthread.php/1918-Media-production-thing
There are many helpful comments and ideas to improve.
"I'd personally want the voice soundtrack less in your face - it feels too much like a game trailer.
Mix the ambient sounds higher and change the reverb on her voice so it sounds like it's being spoken in the environment she's in, rather than a recording studio."
"Loved the lighting at 2:10 when the women is speaking and suddenly you see the other man standing next to her - very nice.
Only quibble would be that the tension doesn't build up - it's there from the start which stops it pulling you in a little.
The sound is spot on, effects, music and speech all work together very well.
Camera angles and shots are excellent."
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